I loved this chapter. Beneath all the neon, grav-cars and firefights, what really caught me was the way people refused to abandon each other. Vim and Noila make such a brilliant pair, and that ending was fantastic. The rumours spreading through the city made it feel less like the end of a rescue and more like the start of a legend. 🤍 Brilliant writing.
I can’t wait for the next one!
Thank you for reading! I’d love a review or something little after you’ve read it, if you could write it :D
I loved this chapter. Beneath all the neon, grav-cars and firefights, what really caught me was the way people refused to abandon each other. Vim and Noila make such a brilliant pair, and that ending was fantastic. The rumours spreading through the city made it feel less like the end of a rescue and more like the start of a legend. 🤍 Brilliant writing.
Thank you! It is going to end in a most glorious way, I say :D
Those two make a great team. So glad they got pipsqueak back. Another fun episode.
We like happy endings. Is there more yet to come?
It is not over! I have a couple more chapters planned.
Excellent