I very much like the sound of this- haven't written any Haiku since I was in elementary school, used to write Nature Haiku (don't remember any of them)- it's something I enjoy reading now but not really my poetry style. What exactly is Flash Fiction tho?? Does that refer to the length of the story??
Ooh Iām in! Here you go -read aged as one syllable š:
The scent of aged books
Ancient dust motes just released
Vellichor abounds
Excellent! I love this :) Btw, the mysterious wooden thing is a spoon!
Ha! Brilliant
Thank you for the high praise. I myself see my haiku as amateurish at best :D
Youth wasted on the young?
Old school wins new generation any day.
Wise man said only fools willā¦
Good, goood, let the vintage Haiku power flow through you :D
"To learn is to live." That's wonderful, and so true! š
I think Vintage Monday will bring many new haiku enjoyers into the wholesome light :D
Thanks for the shout out!
Two tin lanterns
From railways in years past
Rest on my bookshelf
Excellent stuff!
An aged flower;
its petals droop- and yet
it still has beauty
Great stuff! Like the Terran Morale Officers say:
āThe New is not necessarily better, just as the Old isn't always useless.ā
You can never go wrong with listening to wise old people.
I missed this until Starfire Codes included in what sheās reading.
Here goes
After her flower
Awakening blossoms
Sheās shriveled no more
Thank you!
She spit snuff into
An old coffee can by her
A crone sitting there
Thank you
Good haiku :)
Ah, wonderful ā¤ļø. Perfectly put.
Thank you!
Ok now I have to have a picture of this mysterious spoon.
Great haiku. The old Gentleman has just the right gleam in his eye. Like he knows something you don't š¤©
Old people always know the coolest of stuff :D
Thank you for the honorable mention, Knight!
Enjoy your Monday!
Ditto, Knight!
I very much like the sound of this- haven't written any Haiku since I was in elementary school, used to write Nature Haiku (don't remember any of them)- it's something I enjoy reading now but not really my poetry style. What exactly is Flash Fiction tho?? Does that refer to the length of the story??
Flash is a tiny story, you can read awesome stuff on @Miguel S. page btw.
Ill check him out
Thank you for the shoutout.
I wish you a great Monday :)