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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Intriguing story!

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The Black Knight's avatar

I am planning to spin a lot of threads in this one. Perhaps 15 chapters or more. Who is your fav so far? Or just a fav thing,

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

I like that the orphans have a roof over their heads.

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The Black Knight's avatar

The temple of Mara often recruits paladins and clergy from their willing ranks.

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Zachary Harned's avatar

Thanks for the @, my man. I've made some "salty cakes" myself. Got a good chuckle out of it!

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The Black Knight's avatar

I am curious to see what you think :D How did she make them cakes salty?

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Zachary Harned's avatar

Oh no! I made an accidental double entendre, lol! I was just quoting the text. I thought she just made a mistake, and he didn't know the difference.

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The Black Knight's avatar

She might've made a mistake or it was something else :) It is one of the small mysteries I hid in the story.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Thank you for the shoutout.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

I love these two already. Such a great chapter!

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you! I wrote the next chapter and will keep updating if for Warrior Wednesday.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

I’m looking forward to reading it!

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The Black Knight's avatar

I will make sure to post a sneak peak for you :)

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Thank you for the shoutout.

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Lillyput Fields's avatar

Excellent!

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you :)

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Zachary Harned's avatar

I like your setting the world in a city. Very cool, but contained neatly.

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The Black Knight's avatar

I think I forgot to add the index! There are two chapters already.

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MoraleOfficerGran's avatar

A mystery in a mystery. So fun. These two will be so neat to watch grow.

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The Black Knight's avatar

You will all be surprised when the legacy of the mad queen is revealed!

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