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Lillyput Fields's avatar

Wow. Powerful. I hope Joel is ok.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you :) Now you learn more about the priesthood of Mara and how they do things.

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Snowyteller's avatar

That cranked up to eleven quick! Nail biting!

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The Black Knight's avatar

The legacy of the mad queen is no bueno, is all I can say…

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

The action and suspense here is fantastic writing. I really like the character development and birth scene.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you for the restack! I will try to write another episode tomorrow :)

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

You are prolific!

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The Black Knight's avatar

I wish I was prolific-er and had already completed my 8th Starshatter book.

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MoraleOfficerGran's avatar

Very exciting. Took my breath away when the burning woman grabbed Keryln. He has truly left his boy hood behind that day. He is going to be a great warrior. Hopefully he has enough strength left to help Joel.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Things are accelerating in this story. Certain stuff is happening in the background and will eventually be revealed too. I think readers will love it!

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Michael DiBaggio's avatar

Unexpected c-section in the midst of a battle! I am still loving the world building here.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you! She would’ve died had Joel not shown up.

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