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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

A very nice opening! It's a nice change of pace, too, to have someone who's clearly going to need to be much more stealthy and methodical, to claim back their home... 😎

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The Black Knight's avatar

I am writing chapter 6 and it should be completed so I can post it tomorrow.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

😎👍

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MoraleOfficerGran's avatar

Spooky I love Spooky And this Last Man Standing is going to be fun to watch

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The Black Knight's avatar

He is a man in a boy’s body, like all Avern’a child soldiers.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Hope is a powerful thing, isn't it?

A thing not to let the enemy know

lest they take 8 15 16 5 away from you.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Indeed!

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Danny Maldonado's avatar

Space duct tape made me chuckle

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The Black Knight's avatar

Gotta have this lol

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Ooh, very nice!

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The Black Knight's avatar

Thank you! I may not be able to post a chapter each Tuesday but I will try.

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Bill Hiatt's avatar

My, this is quite different from the hamsters--a good illustration of your versatility as a writer.

I picked up the advertised book, which looks interesting.

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