This just awesome. I love how you leave the worst for last and most gruesome death. Nothing from behind. Just straight in her face!! This has been a really fun read.
Well I can safely say, Black Knight what we need next down the road is you to novelize the likes of FF6 and Suikoden. This has been a pretty interesting tale and your use of older dialogue, and middle-English has been quite good. Bravo.
Fair point, I guess I was thinking for free…. okay on second thought screw a novelization, better you make your own steampunk fantasy that knocks it out of the ballpark.
This just awesome. I love how you leave the worst for last and most gruesome death. Nothing from behind. Just straight in her face!! This has been a really fun read.
Thank you! The novella is nearing its end.
Love the line “Only weaklings have slaves do their heavy lifting for them.”
It is so true!
I'd say you nailed this fantasy story. If you publish it and it prints, I'll buy a copy.
It is definitely for print :)
Well I can safely say, Black Knight what we need next down the road is you to novelize the likes of FF6 and Suikoden. This has been a pretty interesting tale and your use of older dialogue, and middle-English has been quite good. Bravo.
Novelize FF6? Wouldn't this be a copyright infringement? :D
Fair point, I guess I was thinking for free…. okay on second thought screw a novelization, better you make your own steampunk fantasy that knocks it out of the ballpark.
I have one that I wrote earlier, but I never novelized it. This one, however, it is really nice, wouldn't you say?
Yep
Extra bonus rpg points for the Overseer's cheeky grin.
Great fun. Engaging prose! Bravo!
Thank you! I aim to finish that novella soon.
Oh.My.Goodness! Knight, that is quite a tale.
The novella is into its final act btw. Only a few episodes left.
There is no stopping you, is there? 💙🙏💫
I have stopped... for the day.
Hahaha. Well good night, sleep well. I’m off now.