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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

The brave Terran Explorer and his forsaken crew

Sought the Star-walker to journey through.

By artificial means, their plea was made,

And the kosmovoi agreed—but a price must be paid.

Not a soul, but wraith-energy rare

To fuel its passage through the void’s despair.

Niv, bold Niv, his soul did offer,

But the kosmovoi refused the proffer.

A deal was struck—a goddess to feed,

The foul Jearn’s energy met its need.

Wrapped in tentacles, the soldiers were borne,

Appearing where the Jearn had sworn.

There, the Terran found the unexpected—

Humans taken, their fate neglected.

Among them, a flame-haired seer,

Her presence strong, her purpose clear.

With Nile’s weapon, swift and sure,

He shattered chains, the captured pure.

Love he found, fierce and bright,

A priestess bound in sacred rite.

But still his duty was not done—

For the Nile-dwellers, he forged the Virbroblade.

He trained them well, their strength renewed,

To fight the hunters through and through.

(I think I'll go with option 1 Better to have everyone armed because Terrans would rather die fighting than as victims.)

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Another amazing chapter! So this week, I think the captives definitely need rest and training first, before they can contemplate another battle, so it has to be 'Option 2'. But that graveyard full of mummies does sound like it needs investigating, as well... 😎

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