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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Vote for 2, the psychic nullifier is most intriguing and I'd like to see what happens with it.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Once freed of chains, the children of the Nile

Trek through the ship—must have walked a mile.

With gentle care, Taia on his back,

Northstone and Niv led the captives' track

To safety's arms, their faith held fast,

While castaway soldiers, grim from the past,

Were watched by the one who walks the stars,

Guarded by Terrans with battle scars.

Then food for the kosmovoi they sought to find—

Spectral-thin, undead—better than rind

Of sweetest fruit, though foul to taste;

Still, none of the Terrans would let it waste.

No Terran stands alone in strife—

They build their homes, they share their life.

With open hearts, they friend the foe,

And through the dark, their kindness shows.

The lady priestess told her tale

Of slavers grim who did assail

Her loyal troops and laid them low,

Before the stars claimed friend and foe.

In iron chains they crossed the sky,

Put to sleep with no goodbye.

But now they wake from timeless keep—

The Nile’s own children, stirred from sleep.

With castaway kin and the Star-Walker bold,

The wily Terran, with spirit old,

They forged a plan to see Jaren fall,

And gathered, silent, one and all

In the belly of hope—a bird of flame—

Where Terran sought a rope to tame

The hunter’s mind in a cage of light,

To break her bones in just-born fight.

"Feed the Star-Walker. Gather the lost.

Count every soul, whatever the cost.

Then fly," he said, "with wings spread wide—

Toward the place where dreams abide."

(option two.)

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