Well I'm reading in order of posting. And this one took me by surprise. The sensory detail is quite intense, which I like. There's a bit of roundabout language here and there, which makes it a little less easy read, but overall not a bad story. I like your style dude!
Well I'm reading in order of posting. And this one took me by surprise. The sensory detail is quite intense, which I like. There's a bit of roundabout language here and there, which makes it a little less easy read, but overall not a bad story. I like your style dude!