Well I'm reading in order of posting. And this one took me by surprise. The sensory detail is quite intense, which I like. There's a bit of roundabout language here and there, which makes it a little less easy read, but overall not a bad story. I like your style dude!
Oh my goodness! Wow! You're impressive. I'm also self taught but raised English, in South Africa. Afrikaans is my second language. I've never attempted to learn a third. I wouldn't know where to start. No judgement. I just found it a little odd. It doesn't detract from the story or anything. I thought "that's an interesting style..."
Well I'm reading in order of posting. And this one took me by surprise. The sensory detail is quite intense, which I like. There's a bit of roundabout language here and there, which makes it a little less easy read, but overall not a bad story. I like your style dude!
What can I say, English is my 3rd language and I am a self taught author :D I am improving little by little with every story.
Oh my goodness! Wow! You're impressive. I'm also self taught but raised English, in South Africa. Afrikaans is my second language. I've never attempted to learn a third. I wouldn't know where to start. No judgement. I just found it a little odd. It doesn't detract from the story or anything. I thought "that's an interesting style..."
I will fight until I can write as smooth as I possibly can. Just you wait :)