i re-read this one as it had been working on something myself this last week and had to re-read this to get back into the gist... about to start reading it now with a vodka and a heavy sigh of relief the work week is over.
Thumbs up on the artwork with the captions. This is a good bit of world building.
Very well done.
I mean that as it was wrote as there is something rewarding from a writer taking that extra mile to put people into the gist of a tale.
his own filtered piss... again. With all the character building and world building you have done in this opening and then go that extra mile.
I bow to you man. good stuff
Survival, he knows it :D Did you read the 2nd chapter I just posted?
i re-read this one as it had been working on something myself this last week and had to re-read this to get back into the gist... about to start reading it now with a vodka and a heavy sigh of relief the work week is over.
Thumbs up on the artwork with the captions. This is a good bit of world building.
Very well done.
I mean that as it was wrote as there is something rewarding from a writer taking that extra mile to put people into the gist of a tale.
The two Velin The Lothorian novellas are perhaps my best work so far.
I actually just read the second installment and I enjoyed it.
There was the right amount of story and action that keeps someone like myself entertained and involved enough to want to know more.
Good stuff man. I like your writing style and vision.
This is just the beginning :D If you can, read the Mage story, of which I posted two chapters already. That novelette was what gave birth to Velin.
Interesting. My series has a few Terrans as well, but is based on an entirely different planet.
Did you read the prologue?
i did. i read a bit fast so did i mss something?
No no, I was just asking :D