"I, Reia, a humble Avern’a Loresinger, am Velin’s chronicler and loving wife. Many a glorious deed did my matchless husband achieve. Through his valor and merciless ferocity in life-saving battle, thousands of innocent lives were secured."
Just went through it. You're very imaginative; I think the world-building is really great. Your prose and writing grew alongside Velin; became more succint and focused. On to the next
"I, Reia, a humble Avern’a Loresinger, am Velin’s chronicler and loving wife. Many a glorious deed did my matchless husband achieve. Through his valor and merciless ferocity in life-saving battle, thousands of innocent lives were secured."
Epic! I loved it. Bravo.
This is one of my most wholesome pieces so far. Btw, the 2nd Velin novella, Velin And The Bunker Of Death is even better!
Well done! I really like the poem!
Thank you! Did you read all chapters?
Just went through it. You're very imaginative; I think the world-building is really great. Your prose and writing grew alongside Velin; became more succint and focused. On to the next